After many rigorous rounds of critique and improvement I can now proudly say I completed my final draft. There wasn't much to change in the draft that I typed up except for one glaring problem, it was too damn long. It was 7 pages if I'm not mistaken. The problem with writing about something that you're passionate about is that the same passion that leads you to write about that thing can lead you to write about it until people grow bored of your rantings. So many major cuts were made to my piece. But I feel like I still feel that I was able to convey what I wanted to. Here is my final draft.
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